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Jennifer James's avatar

Gives a sense of dread. Well executed.

Glad to hear you're planning to use the creature in another story.

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Thérèse Judeana's avatar

Thank you, Jennifer!

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Harold Ember's avatar

Creepy, and interesting.

No I haven't used a nightmare for a story, but I did start writing something based off a dream, which, if i may say so myself, was a great beginning for a book.

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Thérèse Judeana's avatar

Thanks! I believe it, I often find I have a dream that fixes plotline issues I’m struggling with, or serves as inspirations for stories. I like to think that God sees us struggling with the story and gives us a hint sometimes!

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Harold Ember's avatar

Youre welcome. That's a good way to look about it. I'd like to use mine but idk if it'll ever be more than a draft, and that's if I ever finish it. I've got so much more to write

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Heather Dickinson's avatar

You've got some fabulous imagery in this!

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Thérèse Judeana's avatar

Thank you, Heather!

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E.B. Howard's avatar

This is so good!

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Thérèse Judeana's avatar

Thank you! I hope I never have that nightmare again, though I’m curious to see what it turns into 😅

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